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A Lifestyle of Complexity or Simplicity After discussing, we regard that complex lifestyle is like urban lifestyle. It changes a lot and waste a lot. Everyone can be so wasteful and materialistic that he lives in a work-buy-spend-and-throw-away lifestyle. People work in long hours and making more money for satisfy them. Most people just aren?t 1.mv 2.inf. really being honest with themselves about money. They have a high-stress life 3.adj. and more desires. In fact, they don?t know that all they do is far more than they need.
As we know, simplely lifestyle is opposite to complex lifestyle. The word 4.adj ?easy??U> to describe this lifestyle. In other words, it makes people work less 5. mv. and spend less. They know what they need to do, and don?t think too much. ? As the article suggests, people may do better work when they choice work 6. mv. 7. inf. less and spend more time on their family. They don?t buy too much and 8. prep use longer so as to saving. People don?t worry about nothing to do. They just 9. im. work less and have free time to do what they are interested. He or she pays attention to the disposables, food, entertainment and clothing. We like simple lifestyle more than complex lifestyle. We have three reasons to support it. First, we think make money is not the most important thing in our life.Because 10. g. when most people make money, they lose the direction of life. Second, in ? addition to our friends, our families are the people who are closed to us. So 11. adj we should spend more time and pay more attention to them.
Final, simple lifestyle let us face less pressure. Our life will become easily, 12. adv. 13. agr. 14. adj. and we can do what we like. Due to the three reasons, simple lifestyle maybe it will bring more fun to us than complex lifestyle. 15. red. 16. agr. ? Score: 65 |
A Lifestyle of Complexity or Simplicity After discussing, we regard that complex lifestyle is like urban lifestyle. It means changing and wasting. Everyone can be so wasteful and materialistic that he lives in a work-busy-spend-and-throw-away lifestyle. People work in long hours and make more money to satisfy them. Most people just are not really being honest with themselves about money. They have a highly stressful life and more desires. In fact, they do not know that all they do is far more than they need. As we know, simple lifestyle is opposite to complex lifestyle. The word??/SPAN>easy??/SPAN>describes this lifestyle. In other words, it makes people work less and spend less. They know what they need to do, and do not think too much. As the article says, people may do better work when they choose to work less and spend more time with their family. They do not buy too much and things they buy can last longer so as to saving. People do not worry about nothing to do. They just work less and have free time to do what they are interested. He or she pays attention to the disposables, food, entertainment and clothing. We like simple lifestyle more than complex lifestyle. We have three reasons to support it. First, we think making money is not the most important thing in our life. When most people make money, they lose the direction of life. Second, in addition to our friends, our families are the people who are close to us. So we should spend more time and pay more attention to them. Finally, simple lifestyle lets us face less pressure. Our life will become easy, and we can do what we like. Due to the three reasons, simple lifestyle will bring more fun to us than complex lifestyle. Score: 85 |
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