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Feedback on Oral Presentation by Human Ecology students

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Encouragement
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1. The first group is better than the second one because they play a musical CD
       to make their conversation interesting. Besides, their volume is louder than the
       second group. The first group uses more often body language during their
       conversation. The important thing is that they donˇ¦t read their papers. They had
       prepared the homework well.

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2.  The first group is good at pronunciation. They also prepare music, talk with
gestures, and use eye contact. I think they do a good job.

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3.  Their presentation is well-done compared with the second group. However, it would be better if they could give a short introduction of the roles acted by the group members and what situation they are in about the conversation.

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4.   It is about hip-hop dancing. The topic they discuss is very interesting and they make a great performance. I like it.

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5.   We think the first group is excellent because not only they use background music as a part of their presentation but also their conversation is interesting. For us, this group is creative and full of fun. After their presentation we are inspired that presentation will be interesting if rich information is conveyed. Therefore, when we are provided opportunity of oral presentation in English class, we should try our best to make our presentation creative and fun to arouse everyoneˇ¦s attention.

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6.   Good! Music and speech are combined in their presentation. Itˇ¦s interesting! Their conversation is easy to understand. If they could speak fluently, it would be better.

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7.   They perform with music and speak quite fluently though they are nervous. Their content is interesting. What they talk is very useful to me. I can know more about hip-hop music.       

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8.   I think the performance about hip-hop dancing and music is presented in a creative
way. I feel that they must practice hard. However, if they could remember better and become more familiar with lines, their presentation would be better.

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9.  At first, we were shocked by their creative opening when they played music to start presentation. Though most of us donˇ¦t dance very well, we still concentrated on what they were talking about. They make us know better about the Hip-Hop culture.

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10.  Group 1 was awesome. They got background music and one of them even sang.

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11.  Their topic and ideas are interesting. Their performance is fun.

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12.  They use eye contact, body language, and their voice is loud. They seldom look at their papers. Their performance is interesting.

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13.  The music played by the first group is amazing. They really attract me to listen to what they say.

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14.  They added music to the conversation. I think it is good and interesting. Itˇ¦s also a clever idea to use body language to help them express ideas. One of the members speaks larger part compared with the other members.  

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Improvement:
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1.  I think they didnˇ¦t prepare the presentation very well. Actually, they were nervous. In my opinion, they could add some actions in the show to make presentation more interesting. Besides, their voice was too low to be heard.

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2.  They were reading. It is not conversation. And their voice was so low that I couldnˇ¦t hear them very clearly.  

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3.   Not good! They need to practice more.

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4.   The presentation by the second group is not as interesting as the first one. Maybe they should make more preparation before presenting it.

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5.   It seems that they didnˇ¦t rehearse beforehand.

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6.   They speak too quickly sometimes. 

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7.   They speak by looking at papers. If their voice was loud enough, their speaking could be clearly heard.    

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Ideas:
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They talk about movies and movie star. I like science-fiction and war movies. These movies can bring me many different thoughts such as the value of life. My favorite movie star is Tom Hank. He is a great actor and director.

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