Feedback on Oral Presentation by Textile students

Encouragement
　

1.   Their accent is correct. There are interesting acting and good expressions in their  
 presentation. Their conversation is a good one.  

2.   Their accent sounds good. Voice is loud too.

3.    It’s a good conversation. It is fluent. But their voice is too weak.

4.    It’s real as our daily conversation. Their tone is natural, not tense.

5.    The speakers have good interaction with each other.    

6.    Their voice is too low, but they can articulate their ideas very well. 

7.    Their conversation is full of fun. They show great energy when they are presenting their speech. We like it very much.

8.    They act well and use body language properly. But their voice is too low. Their topics are easy to understand. 

9.    Voice is a little weak. But acting is vivid. Performers are very cute. 陳育瑭 is the best.  

10.  It’s about parents’ worries. Their ideas in the conversation are really close to our
life.

11.  It’s very good. But their volume is not loud enough.

12.  Not bad. It’s interesting. I think they should take easy with their presentation so that they will not be nervous and are able to raise their voice louder. And it will be better. 

Improvement:
　

1.    I think they could add more actions in their conversation.

2.   They are too nervous. Their personality is pretty friendly, though.

3.   Their voice is too weak. I think they can speak louder, not just reading the conversation.

4.    I can’t hear them, but I can understand them sometimes when they are using
hand gestures.

5.    Their voice is too low to hear.

6.    The voice is too weak. We can hardly hear their conversation! But their ideas and  body language are interesting.

7.    Voice is very weak. We cannot hear it clearly.

8.    Their conversation is too short.

9.    The volume is a little low. I can barely hear what they are talking about.

10.  They speak too low so we can’t hear it clearly.

11.  Their volume can be turned up a bit. I can barely understand what they’re talking
  about. Therefore, I can’t grade or rank them.

12.  The volume can be louder and there should be more acting when they are talking
   to each other.

13.  Speak loudly, please.  

14.  The voice is too low to hear.

15.  Volume should be loud.

16.  Their volume is too low.

Ideas:
　

1.     They talk about parents’ care of child’s security.  

2.     They are buying clothes and backpack at shop. They choose to buy a white   
3.     Clothes and a backpack which can put A4 paper. The white clothes costs 1500
         and the backpack 350. They also order coke to drink.  

4.     They are talking about their parents’ worries.

5.     Their parents worry about their safety and don’t like their friends.

6.     They are talking about music, movies, shopping and dating.

7.     They made a scene in a store bargaining with a clerk and asking her direction.

8.     They go to buy clothes and bags. After that, they go to buy something to eat.

9.     They are bargaining and tipping at shop. They also ask direction.

10.   They talk about colors of shorts and shoes. They also bargain about clothes and bags.

11.    They talk about children in school and their normal life.

12.    It’s about bargain. They talk about fast food.

13.    They talk about parents’ worries.

14.    Group 2 talks about lottery and marriage.