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Example 6 |
Group: 5
Names: Shirley, Vicky, Andrew, Karen,
Frank
(Sophomore, Italian)
Composition 2: Smoking
Ways to Quit Smoking |
I. Introduction
Paragraph.
A. Natural
treatment
1. cutting down
frequency of smoking
B. Chemical
treatment
1. the most
effective t alleviate physical addiction
2. nicotine patches and gums
3. discuss with doctor before
using due to side-effects |
Thesis Statement:
Quitting smoking is thus not an impossible mission
although some of them do have disadvantages or
side-effects which deserve patientsˇ¦ attention.
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II. Nicotine
Patches to be one of the chemical treatments
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A. What is Nicotine Patches?
1. king of the
game
2. small, self-adhesive stick
to your skin
3. blood stream at steady rate
4. doses taken to raise and/or
lower nicotine level
5. different strengths
B. Advantages
1. provide
steady supply of nicotine
2. work in any situation
3. deterrent
C.
Disadvantages
1. suffer
symptoms of overdoes - death
2. irritate skin
3. weird dreams
4. rough in the morning without
it during sleep
5. taboo smoking at the same
time wearing a patch not to remove it |
II. Nicotine Gums
to be one of the chemical treatments |
A. What is it?
1. another
source to provide you with nicotine
2. a gum for you
to chew
3. in different strengths (4 or
2 mg per piece) based on how much you smoke
4. nicotine replacement therapy
5. deal with physical addiction
over a long period of which
6. with less withdrawal
symptoms
B. Advantages
1. take it
anytime you need it but not exceed the suggested amount
2. cut down nicotine quickly or
slowly as you want
3. inexpensive
4. provide oral gratification
to replace cigarettes
C.
Disadvantages
1. not to chew
it with soda or alcoholic beverage
2. no good at bar
3. feel sick if chew too much
or too fast
4. takes longer time if to be
effective
5. become irritable while
waiting to affect you |
III. Cutting down
to be the natural treatments
A. An alternative if not having much confidence on
chemical treatment
1. alleviate
only psychological addiction- powerful and painful to
get rid of
2. useful for
real life
3. need plan and resolution
B. Life Sign- a
beeper and an electronic device
1. a plan helps
quit smoking
2. a pager you carry with you
3. pressing a button to inform
the pager youˇ¦re smoking during the first few
weeks
4. several weeks later start to
cut down
5. the beeper beeps to tell you
when to smoke
6. gradually cutting down
7. gradually breaking
psychological addiction by removing cues
8. replacing by beeping as
alarm to condition your desire to smoke
9. eventually not to feel
smoking as beeping sounds |
IV.
Conclusition Paragraph -. Miscellaneous about quitting
cold turkey (Summary
and more solutions are offered)
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A. Other reasons
why difficult to quit
1.
functioning as normal human being.
2. feeling like an angry,
rabid bear if without nicotine the initial five days of
craziness.
3. not as fit company
for other humans (it to fit, smoking is necessary)
B.
Some things you can do to make quitting cold turkey
difficult as opposed to
impossible (possible):
1.
begin quitting
only on the weekend (or off duty)
2.
sleep and watch
TV a lot
3.
avoid
frustrating situations
4.
avoid place
where people smoking.
5.
call people how lousy you feel.
6.
keep
non-alcoholic drinks on hand; drinking fluids helps to
flush the
nicotine out of your system faster.
7.
chewing gum,
chew it.
8.
a one cigarette
away from failure smoker |
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