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Example 7 |
Group 11
Erica, Paola
(Spanish, sophomore)
Composition 2: Advantages and Disadvantages of Internet
Romance
Internet Romance Is Not the
Only Way to Meet Your Future Spouse |
I. Introduction
Paragraph.
A. the age of
technology
B. computers and internet being used in
1. every aspect
of lives,
2. killing time,
3. managing finances,
4. searching for jobs, going shopping,
5. and even finding romance
C. boring and
lonely life bothering people
1. getting out
the small cage
2. internet overcoming the limitation
D. internet
romances
1. increasing
and popular
2. instant relationships
3. a trend influencing everyone more or
less |
Thesis Statement
Why is it attracting and addictive to the Internet
users? Does it offer us a safe alternative to know
people? Are we aware of the dangers we might risk?
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II. Start an
online relationship is quite easy, but full of lies.
A. can be
anyone and anything he or she wants to be
1.
personal files are nothing more than made-up stories.
2. a jerk in the real world is charming on
the Internet
B. can easily
hide secretes behind the screen
1.
safer than going out for sake of privacy
2. guilty of telling lies in everyday life
3. but not on the internet , the world of
imagination.
C. ˇ§soul
communicatingˇ¨
1. for shy
people finer than normal dating
2. those who are thoughtless and easy to
trust people
3. easier and comfortable
4. without eye looking a better and fluent
expression
D. another way
to love and experience romance. |
III. Most people
are unconscious of its danger.
A. tragedy
happens when deciding to meet in person.
1. a stereotype
of someone whom we want to see
2. if truth out of imagination, things
losing control.
B. an example
1. takes place
in France
2. 30 engineer met gorgeous enchantress on
chatting room
3. flirting
4. embarrassing she was his mother
5. everyone heard it and husband and wife
humiliated |
IV. Conclusion
Paragraph
A. problems and
conflicts in real world
B. cannot connecting to the world by internet only
C. internet being only one of the resources
D. real relationship based on real contact
E. Internet romance
1. fresh
2. rapid and momentary
3. not last and fade away easily
4. internet crime
5. victims of online relationship being cheated and
hurt
6. full of uncertainties and dangers
(Summary as
conclusion) |
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