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Example 7

Group 11
Erica, Paola
(Spanish, sophomore)
Composition 2: Advantages and Disadvantages of Internet Romance

Internet Romance Is Not the Only Way to Meet Your Future Spouse

I. Introduction Paragraph.
   
A. the age of technology
    B. computers and internet being used in
      
1. every aspect of lives,
       2. killing time,
       3. managing finances,
       4. searching for jobs, going shopping,
       5. and even finding romance
   
C.  boring and lonely life bothering people
      
1. getting out the small cage
       2. internet overcoming the limitation
   
D.  internet romances
      
1. increasing and popular
       2. instant relationships
       3. a trend influencing everyone more or less
 


Thesis Statement
Why is it attracting and addictive to the Internet users? Does it offer us a safe alternative to know people? Are we aware of the dangers we might risk?  
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II. Start an online relationship is quite easy, but full of lies.
   
A. can be anyone and anything he or she wants to be
     
 1. personal files are nothing more than made-up stories.
       2. a jerk in the real world is charming on the Internet
   
B. can easily hide secretes behind the screen
     
 1. safer than going out for sake of privacy
       2. guilty of telling lies in everyday life
       3. but not on the internet , the world of imagination.
    
C. ˇ§soul communicatingˇ¨
      
1. for shy people finer than normal dating
       2. those who are thoughtless and easy to trust people
       3. easier and comfortable
       4. without eye looking a better and fluent expression  
   
D. another way to love and experience romance.

III. Most people are unconscious of its danger.
   
A. tragedy happens when deciding to meet in person.
      
1. a stereotype of someone whom we want to see
       2. if truth out of imagination, things losing control.
   
B. an example
      
1. takes place in France
       2. 30 engineer met gorgeous enchantress on chatting room
       3. flirting
       4. embarrassing she was his mother
       5. everyone heard it and husband and wife humiliated

IV.  Conclusion Paragraph
   
A. problems and conflicts in real world
    B. cannot connecting to the world by internet only
    C. internet being only one of the resources
    D. real relationship based on real contact
    E. Internet romance

       1. fresh
       2. rapid and momentary
       3. not last and fade away easily
       4. internet crime
       5. victims of online relationship being cheated and hurt
       6. full of uncertainties and dangers
(Summary as conclusion)

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