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COHERENCE ³s³e©Ê

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¡@ Women tend to be more concerned about their marriage than men. They do many things to make their marriage successful and satisfactory.  Many women buy books on marriage to try to improve their personality or appearance. They even initiate most marriage counseling. They often complain about their marriages to their closest friends and seek advice how to resolve family disagreement. If there is no any way else to save their marriage, eventually they file for divorce and the rate is twice as often as men.
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¦b³o½gµuµuªº¬q¸¨¸Ì²Ä¤@¥y: Women tend to be more concerned about their marriage than men. «Ü©úÅã¦aÄÝ©ó¥DÃD¥y(topic sentence). ¦ý¶i¤@¨B¬°¤F»¡©ú¤k¤H¦p¦óÃö¤ß¦o­Ìªº±B«Ã, §@ªÌ³¯­z¤F¤k¤H¬°¤F½T«O©¯ºÖ¬üº¡ªº±B«Ã, ¦o­ÌºÉ¤O¦Ó¬°: They do many things to make their marriage successful and satisfactory. ³o¤@¥yÅãµM¬O¥D¤ä´©¥y(major support)¦]¬°Ãö¤ß´N·N¿×µÛ±Ä¨ú¦æ°Ê¥H¹F¨ì¥¿­±ªº®ÄªG, ©Ò¥H±Ä¨ú¦æ°Ê(do many things)¬O¹ïÃö¤ß(concern)§@¶i¤@¨Bªº¸ÑÄÀ. ¦ýdo many things¤Ó©â¶H¤F, °µ­þ¨Ç¨Æ©O? ³o®É§@ªÌ¦CÁ|¤F¤@¨Ç¹ê½èªº¨Ò¤l: Âǵ۱Ш|¦p¾\Ū®ÑÄy¨Ó§ïµ½«~®æ¥~ªí(buy books on marriage to try to improve) their personality or appearance), ¥D°Ê±µ¨ü®a®x»P±B«Ãªº¤ß²z»²¾É(initiate most marriage counseling), »P¦nªB¤Í¶D»¡¤ß¨Æ(complain about their marriage)¨Ã´M¨D¥L­Ì¸Ñ¨M®a®x¯Éª§ªº«Øij(seek advice how to resolve family disagreement), ¦pªGÁÙ¤£¦æ, ¥L­ÌÃö¤ß¦Û¤vªº©¯ºÖ¥D°Ê¥Ó½ÐÂ÷±B, ¦Ó¥B¤ñ¨k¤H§ó¿n·¥(If there is no any way else to save their marriage, eventually they file for divorce and the rate is twice as often as men.)§@ªÌ¦CÁ|ªº³o¨Ç¨Ò¤l¤Î»²¤ä´©¥y(minor support).
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